GOLDENINNEREYE

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Monday, February 27, 2006

The world of future

everything is getting leaner,
everyone is getting meaner

life is getting expensive,
people are taken for granted

humanity is decreasing,
people are freezing

everything is getting leaner,
everyone is getting meaner



people die with great pomp and show,
still no one cares about the dying crow

so less is transparency,
everyone is naked

everything is getting leaner,
everyone is getting meaner

friendship is just a mutual tie-up,
brothers are breaking up

families are getting nano,
children are fast and professional

Is this the world we dreamt of?

everything is getting leaner,
everyone is getting meaner.

2 Comments:

  • At Monday, February 27, 2006 , Blogger jocklohm junction said...

    hey good attempt at poetry writing... u shud write more poems, they say so much in so less words. d subject ws difficult but challenging by d way. but truly answer this - wen u wrote this poem, wer u thinking about the subject solely, or also how to frame it n go about it?

     
  • At Monday, February 27, 2006 , Blogger punjabi~car~freak! said...

    hey man I was thinking of the future.. I was imagining how my children might be... so I guess I was thinking only of the subject..I was lil cautious wid my words but thats about it.

     

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